What will send my fictitious character into an emotional rage? I need to decide what will set things in motion before I write another scene. My personal emotions may be blocking my thoughts because I want to use doctors for target practice. Just because I want to place a doctor into the scene, doesn’t mean I should.

I installed a preliminary reason for revenge, but I probably  should a more immediate reason. If my character thinks she is being manipulated, for real or not, then she will have reason to strike. Still pondering.

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