Making one character suspicious of another, adds tension. Even the short-lived tension; which, comes from an idea that I had will help. If I go back and edit, I may be able to cast suspicion earlier and extend the tension.
Circe turned men into pigs. When you get stuck in the sty, you best try to enjoy the mud.
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