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Dissection of a Misanthrope

The Writing Diary of M Brace DeFreak

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August 2017

An alternate reality rather than a Roman à clef

My use of trivia creates questions of legality. I prefer an alternate reality approach, but the name changes of a Roman à clef may be safer. In an alternate reality, my fictional cult exists and sexuality is more permissive and Paris Hilton would have needed to hum two guys, at the same time, to rise above the ho-hum of the normal new cycle.

Dujana Barnes’ wrote the classic Roman à clef, Nightwood. Barnes uses an alias for Natalie Barney, in Nightwood. The novel is an early classic in lesbian literature and one of my lines about Naiad Press purred this post. I’m into Florida trivia, but I often steer clear of political correctness. Naiad Press publishes correspondences with Dorothy Allison who founded the Lesbian Sex Mafia, so I’m not sure how out of line my line really is.

Les Ruches, the school which Natalie Barney attended plays a role in my novel, and I make use of coincidences to form a conspiracy led by my cult. Are there elements of truth–Yes, but the conspiracy and the cult is fictional.

One poll I studied shows one out three of lesbians dabbles with BDSM, in my hypersexual version, the ratio would become two out of three. If the Maenads of ancient Greece endured until contemporary times, hypersexuality would be the norm.

 

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Liberal Racists of TMZ Not Welcome On Timucuan Land

Racism isn’t a White Southern disease you Liberal bigots. The host of TMZ is Jewish and which side did the high-ranking Jews work on during the American Civil War — the Confederacy. Harvey Robert Levin will face the wrath of my Timucuan war club if I ever run across his liberal ass and let’s see how his law degree stands up to that. I don’t have a problem with Jews, I have a problem with holier than thou elitists. The Civil War was about money. All Lincoln had to do was boycott cotton. Slavery was an economic issue and wealthy people of this world who condemn the South are hypocrites.

Crack open your wallet and if you want to ease tensions. You f-ing asses.

And if you think Muslims are sinless in the slavery issue–I gotta laugh. I’m relatively certain they were still cutting off the call of their slaves until relatively recently.

Native Americans Against Supreme Court Justice Sonia Sotomayor

As a representative of Florida’s most native tribe; I condemn Barrack Obama for placing the racist — Supreme Court Justice Sonia Sotomayor on the Supreme Court. Penalties should not be placed on native, so the immigrant can proper. Treat Puerto Ricans like Sotomayor treats a true native to Florida and see if they like it. Support for Obama and Sotomayor is supporting racism. The American Supreme Court is the Supreme Court of Injustice ass long as Sotomayor serves.

Impossible to please every writing app

SlickWrite and ProwritingAid measure sentence-breaks differently, the Slickwrite measures from period to period, but the ProwritingAid treats a semicolon like a period. Both apps measure the variety in sentence length, but the apps measure differently. Paperrater sucks, for a creative fiction author; James Joyce does the best of authors I sampled, but his work doesn’t pass all the tests.

ProwritingAid notes how sentence transitions apply to non-fiction, so failure for a fiction writer in that statistic is meaningless; while, Paperrater never mentions the difference between fiction and non-fiction–and just fails you. Sentence transitions (i.e. meanwhile and therefore) are different from temporal transitions or transitions of place, but I notice most don’t explain the difference. Paperrater faults simple sentence starts, but I’m not sure you can do much about that without adding prepositions.

Paperrater faults simple sentence starts, but I’m not sure you can do much about that without adding prepositions. The app did show how I tend to tack transitional phrases on the end and less often begin the sentence with a transitional phrase (I.e. before, after, near, and etc…), so I saw one benefit.

 

Little Egypt Unveiled

Little Egypt represents the type of girls who join my cult. Ashea Wabe (born Catherine Devine (1871 – January 3, 1908)[3] Wikipedia says this particular Little Egypt enjoyed success via scandal (succès de scandale) by getting arrested for intent to go nude, the cops went in too early. Considering how much money she had when she died you gotta wonder if she performed other services.

Such dancers became common for a while but Wikipedia lists three who danced as Little Egypt. Billboard magazine advertised for such jobs in Florida, so my circus cult would certainly be feasible. Anyone who danced the Dance of Seven Veils would be eligible for my fictional cult. I often call the cult a Mata Hari cult and she danced the dance. The Elvis Presley,  Roustabout featured the Little Egypt dancers.

Slavery is alive and well in Africa

Obama’s African ancestors practiced slavery and more than likely were practicing after the American Civil War. One of the largest slaveholders in Florida was an African woman Anna Madgigine Jai Kingsley who inherited her husband’s massive holdings and one thing of note, her husband patterned his life after African chieftain’s; which, is why he had multiple wives. The Spanish and Portuguese practiced slavery much longer than the British who primarily settled the US, but the hatred always gets aimed at the South; even though, New Jersey had more slaves than every Southern state; excluding South Carolina. Why not call Africans and people from Spanish colonies Nazis like you do Southerners. I’m Native American and I can’t help but have Southern ancestry because my ancestors were here before the Pilgrims landed in Plymouth Rock. Death to the racism of Obama and Supreme Court Justice Sonia Sotomayor. Han Chris Mathews of NBC and cut the heads of the network who puts someone like Chris Matthews on air. I venture into hyperbole when I’m angry, but the rage has to come out somehow–you lousy holier than thous.

Adding bits of narration

I don’t see the importance in adding details to a dialogue driven scene, but some readers prefer details. One piece of narration, I added, showed the scene occurs, as the main character leaves a classroom. The location is meaningless to me, but I suspect others prefer a locale. If someone wants more details they have the wrong writer. When the main aspect of the scene could take place elsewhere, I’m not enthusiastic about offering description.

Forced to adapt to the invaders

Even the Seminoles are invaders to Florida, in comparison to my family. People attack me for being a Southerner but big fat mouthed liberals shut their trap when they find out I’m not just your average White guy. The rude lady from the drawbridge was one such person.  All  I get from the invaders is rudeness, traffic, and anxiety. Death to the racism of Obama and Supreme Court Justice Sonia Sotomayor. Death to the liberal hypocrisy of NBC’s Chris Mathews. Death to NBC for allowing Chris Mathews to still appear on TV.

The Alpha-female

Females use social aggression rather than, male preferred, physical aggression. The main character, in my novel, progresses from ‘butt of jokes’ to Alpha — piss in your face territory. Yes, my dwarf is physically aggressive, too, but her power comes from the social circle. Rosalind Wiseman‘s self-help book targets adolescents, but adult women play the same game. Anything to do with body image comes from pressure by peers and the fashion industry which more often features gay guys. Straight guys have preferences in body image, but the constant pressure doesn’t come from us.

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